Reel 08-07

[v4vicky]

This is the reel of my free work
of August,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YjSl85Kn9W8"]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YjSl85Kn9W8

feedbacks are highly
appreciable.

i works for freelance (vfx, and vfx animation)
i m looking for vfx friends,

mail me for creating network (online.vivek@yahoo.co.in)


thanks your friend
vivek

[PikiX]

Hi v4vicky.

I saw your reel, and looks good except couple of things that didn´t look believable to me in that road composition

I think it needs a bit of color correction, maybe the road should be wet and also rain drops should be collapsing with the road to make it more realistic.

Keep it up

[DJMartin]

Okey, you got some things to work out, but you are going in the right direction!

Breakdowns! What and how did you do it, very important.

The contact info on the end, well. You can make it a LOT better. Starting by changing the font and colors. Speeding it down down down, I didn't get the time to read anything of it.
It's called matte paintings, not mattes, which can be very confusing.

How many and who worked at this reel, make that clearer.

I hope you don't get to sad:p Im just writing my thoughts.

Good luck!

[Aguz]

Your reel is not very good.

Why did the clouds in the background move that fast? They should travel much slower. It looks strange, and the shot is not interesting as it is. It has potential. Add more to it.

The collapsing bridge doesn't look right. Horrible camera angle. Why haven't you done anything with the ocean? It's static.

Remove the character animation. I don't see the point showing it.

You should work more on your reel. I'm sorry for being so hard.

[jay_hind]

Hello.I don't know which software you used to make them.All the planes are in same angle and same speed,apply some rendomness.In rain shot all the rain drops will not look of same size you have to apply 4 to 5 layers of rain drops of different size.Bridge breaking is good