View Full Version : WIP desert shot
October 28th, 2009, 08:49 AM
This is something I'm working on for a student project. The footage was shot on a green screen and the objective was to set the subject in a desert/wasteland setting.
Lemme know what you think.
November 9th, 2009, 12:57 PM
**edit** I would slow the end of the shot back down. There is little hold at the end. I would slow it down as much as you can as soon as he points toward camera and gets his hand back into "firing position", this way his hands don't look shaky and it will be more of a confident powerful pose.
The other thing that stuck out to me is that the mountains look kind of close in the background. there is a very sharp line separating the foreground and background. Maybe some mid-ground bushes and some heat distortion would help.
I don't know your compression settings and what monitor you're working on but I might pull the saturation down a little too.
December 10th, 2009, 03:32 PM
I know that is probably too late, but your work looks interesting. Shot alone is simple and looks good.
I am missing some slight movement, maybe motion of the coat caused by wind or any air effect like sand dragging over desert. I would make some small blur on background too.
It looks good anyway.
December 12th, 2009, 05:10 AM
Its pretty good.
Just the light wrap is bigger than it should-in my opinion