Subway - set extension

[cornholio27]

Hi all,

I'm trying to improve my VFX skills by doing some small personal projects.
Any comments, suggestions, improvements or advice would be really great.

many thanks


http://vimeo.com/37022734

[davidrodriguez]

Nice track. Is it Boujou?

[cornholio27]

Thanks David, but not convinced it's spot on - it was PF Track

[yakuzowner]

hi, to me it looks good - just a few things that could be double checked...the guy on screen left seems to jump back between second 2 and 3 which was most obvious to me when focussing on him - but also in other moments I wasn't sure if he was slipping slightly as well. The reflections of the lamps screen right in the back seem off to me - they're too diagonal and thatway don't exactly match the vanishing point of the scene.
These two little things I would fix and then it'll work for me - especially in theatre the slight slipping of the talent could be little weird to the audience. However it looks pretty good so far.

[dcompz]

This is probably nitpicking but in addition to the other comments, something about the foreground reflections on the right wall seems a little off. I like how you added them back in over the graffiti, but spraypaint wouldn't have the same surface quality as the glossy tiles. Try toning it down a little at least in the areas where the graffiti is. Definitely looking good though. Nice work.

[cornholio27]

Thanks guys - appreciate you taking the time.


yakuzowner - I've tweaked the reflections at the back now (good spot) and have tried to nail the track a bit more (the card was actually floating a little high), but I think I'm struggling with some weird artifacts from my raw footage. It seems to have some strange distortions/sliding (rolling shutter?)

dcompz - great call on the graffiti. Will have a look at that when I get a sec. Amazing how obvious things seem when they're pointed out!