San Fran Bridge by Night - W.I.P.

[s0r|n3l]

hello guys,
I'm new in this kind of work, most of my jobs are to move layers and add some effects.
This is a realy challenge for me.
Here you find my first try ... link ... , hope you like it.



Edit: forgot to say. This is made in After Effects.

[s0r|n3l]

Hi again,
Here you'l find an update to my "night" on the bridge.
Is still WIP, I have to work harder to lights and cars from the bridge.
Nothing (I think) dosn't work... .
Finnaly, hope what I try to do end fine.

I seen a lot of good work here, in this challenge. Good luck everybody

Sorry for my english.

again.

See you,
Sorin

[FKMaster]

the road burns.........too much yellow/green....i think....
i'll would scale the moon......a little bit smaller........
looks good ! keep going

[s0r|n3l]

I know, I have to work harder to road and lights on it...but in last week my job keep me far from progress in this "night" scene.

FKMaster for your time ... I'm glad you like it.

[edism]

looks good the only thing is the lights on the bridge, they are to yellow.

and the cars, well it looks like they are breaking(the back light are on the whole way.). try to change the variaty of the color red to make it seem like it's stopping but then going, like stepping on the brake pedal and then letting it go. the front lights of the cars are to bright,tone them down just a bit( I hope that I make sense). but besides that, it looks good. keep up the good work.

Goodluck.

[ShadowMaker SdR]

I don't know, but when I have my car lights turned on, the rear lights had better be red. Of course brake lights are BRIGHTER red, but still it's perfectly normal for the rear lights to be red.

[edism]

I don't know, but when I have my car lights turned on, the rear lights had better be red. Of course brake lights are BRIGHTER red, but still it's perfectly normal for the rear lights to be red.

I'm not saying to change the color, just that there are some cars that have a bright red(meaning that they are stopping)and others that don't. There's a car that is moving thru the whole scene and the rear light are full bright red thru the whole animation. all I'm saying is to lower the tone on the red so that it means that they are moving(which the cars are doing). Then he can brighten up the red to mean they are slowing down or stopping on a certain point in the animation.

[s0r|n3l]

thanks guys for your support and for tips...
Edism, you've right with the rear red lights. I'm going to fix this problem...
The bridge and his lights are not finished up...there is a big WIP, the bright yellow light from the street is a test "light" to see the hole progression in compo.

[s0r|n3l]

After more try I made this night scene...and I like it...hope like you to...
If there are problems, please write to me and I'll fix.

See you soon, maybe with full motion not only stills...

[s0r|n3l]

hi guys,
sorry to inform that, but my night scene is not ready to post at finished work, because my job project is still before dead-line and I don't have time to end it.

Good luck everyone who's post their final job ... most of them are great.
Sorin

P.S. I hope at 3'rd edition have more time to work at challenge.

[edism]

man you should post what ever you have even if it's not finish. You never know other people would think that is finish and might vote for you.
From you thumbnail, it looks finish to me.
but it's all up to you.....

cheers

[s0r|n3l]

thanks man for your advice, but in my opinion the scene is not ready to post at finished work.
I don't know, but I think is better to post ended jobs.

Thanks again edism, and all people who see my WIP progress and post their opinion.

Sorin

[SalaTar]

remember just posting a submission gives you points in a 12 month contest..


edit just read rules seems that has changed