War scene - Tanks

[david-]

This is my second matte painting test.
Feel free to feedback!

[metalrahul]

It's a good effort but I think you could try adding some more atomosphere like dust or fog and also add camera shake to make it look more dramatic.

[david-]

It's a good effort but I think you could try adding some more atomosphere like dust or fog and also add camera shake to make it look more dramatic.

Yes, I think you're absolutely right. I should have added some atmospheres at last

[krizard]

good!!!!
adjust the shadows in the tank they look to soft, but should be hard, compare them to the girl running..

[joeym4130]

Nice start! My critique:

I'm not really sure what you're working with here (3d models or stills?) but I'm not a big fan of the composition of the scene. I barely noticed the tank on the right of the frame, its cropped off enough that I might not have known what it was until it fired, so I'd play with the placing of your tank elements a bit.

More atmosphere would be nice too, as mentioned by metalrahul

I don't know what the source plate size is, but if you could do a camera move like a dolly in post I think that would add more life to your scene as well (but this would only work correctly if you have the 3D tank models so you can have the perspective shift - like I said I don't know what you started with)

also, I like the sky replacement you did, really made it more dramatic!

[vivapower]

dude, missing link..........

[david-]

Now it's fixed again.
joeym4130 I think you're totally right! But the problem is that I was just using a pic on a tank, not a 3d model.