Spot For Israeli Tank Brigade

[black_lion]

I just finished working on this spot for a small TV station in Texas. Could you guys critique it?

[taraba]

i was a child in war.......

war sucks. tank brigades too. and soldiers and guns...

i think, spots about about tank brigades can't be good... : )

[black_lion]

i was a child in war.......

war sucks. tank brigades too. and soldiers and guns...

i think, spots about about tank brigades can't be good... : )

I sympathize with your history and your opinion, however, I am looking for feedback on the work, not your opinion of my clients dealings.